Hey Bloggers today my blog is about poem that we do for homework and I did this poem called why the wind in day time solar hope you lot hope you like it and if you don't like it then you can comment in the comments below and tell me why you don't like it and if you do like it then just bad luck because you don't get a comment but if you don't like it then you can also tell me what I can do to improve and where I can improve and what I can improve on so hope you like it bye
The wind blows like a rose in the summertime. when it's windy you don't get to play because it could be too windy to play us site but when the summer time when your weather is fine you go play outside and get a rainy then you don't. now play outside don't play with rubber ball's they might blow in the wind and get onto the road and get lost.
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